Snail Mail or E-Mail (English 2-Writing in the Discipline)

My teacher told us na magsulat kami ng isang topic about the Comparison and Contrast,at ang napili kong Topic is all about the evolution of sending a message through E-mail and a Snail Mail. And here's what I've write:

SNAIL MAIL OR E-MAIL

Sending a message is a form of communication where two individuals are far away from each other. They send it via electronic mail (E-mail) or Snail Mail(writing a letter or telegrams). Similarly, e-mail and snail mail contains words and it tells some details on what is happening around. In snail mail,it should be written in proper order. On the other hand, e-mail can be write in formal or informal form. In making a letter, you need to have an envelope and your letter in order to send itwhile in electronic mail, you can easily used your own computer and in just one click, your letter can be done in fastest way. Likewise, e-mail and snail mail can be read by the receiver. But in the way of expressing those words, snail mail is more beautiful than e-mail. And in the way they sending it, you need to go to the Postal Office if you will send a letter unlike in the e-mail which they can easily send via internet.

Jessica Marie S. Borromeo

1-As
January 27,2009

And you know what,I got the score of 20 out of 20!!!Hahaha!!! Sobrang happy but unsatisfied because of my wrong grammar. kita naman eh!!! hehehe!!!!

Un lng muna ang isha-share ko sa inyo!!!!